A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
Only area of possible confusion I saw: "home to the scenic A. Y. Jackson Lookout, overlooking the waterfall depicted in his 1953 painting..." - replacing "his" with "Jackson's" would make this a bit more readable.
Overall: this article is pretty good. The citation should be pretty easy to add- once it's added, I'll pass the article. If no action's taken in seven days, I'll fail the article.
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12:12, 7 December 2020 (UTC)reply
I've added two refs that verify the information in the paragraph in question, and made the change to "Jackson's" as you recommended. Thanks for the review! - Floydianτ¢03:05, 8 December 2020 (UTC)reply