There is no need to use 4 or 5 sources to back up the same thing, three is more than enough.
house beat] → house beat
Jamie Milton described it as a "gigantic trance chorus",[34] and Dan Reilly → I assume they are music critics for magazines but there is no reference to it.
Could add a sound of the song to the composition section, however, not mandatory.
""Old Love / New Love" was released by Shadow as single" → The last source contradicts the statement you made, as it only says it was only released as a single for the videogame.
No need to use source 41, just copy the Billboard one (number 36) here.
Done
Critical reception
"According to him, when it happens it is positive, and also added the conclusion is better," → what is positive and negative and why? I don't understand
"Alex Young mentioned it was more suitable for the dance clubs than "six-star killing spree." → which publications, magazines they wrote this for?
" Gerrit Feenstra noted "Old Love / New Love" as "one of the finest tracks" from it, a feeling Pat Levy" → same as previous
"one of the finest tracks" from the it" → "one of the finest tracks" from it
"After the release of Eclipse Embling" → After the release of Eclipse, Embling
"Ian Gormely considered Shadow created a "sublime catharsis"; Heather Phares lauded its contemporary sound" → missing one source.
Jayson Greene labeled it as "sexy" → from Pitchfork
Be sure to link every writer to a publication as most of the critics, writer for various magazines.
"several music critics graded "Old Love / New Love" as a highlight from Eclipse" → three sources is enough.
Done
Track listing
Fine.
Credits
Always use small caps to begin the sentence. (Wynne Bennett – Keyboards → Wynne Bennett – keyboards).
Use – (click to copy and edit)
Done
References
Ref 28 is dead, use the archive by adding "dealurl=yes" to the parameters.
The Music Ninja → remove it, doesn't seem like a reliable site.