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Preliminary digression, as one whose family home was in
Keswick, Cumbria I take a dim view of other Cheese Farms muscling in, but yours, irritatingly, seems to have got in first. I shall try not to let this prejudice me.
Nothing to frighten the horses, and certainly not worth formally putting the review on hold for.
Lead
"The street still floods on high spring tides" – this isn't mentioned in the body of the text, and according to
WP:LEAD there didn't oughter be anything in the lead that isn't in the main text.
Added to Geography, and cited.
St Nicholas Church
dates from 1882-4 – needs attention from the MoS point of view: full four-figure years and an en-dash rather than a hyphen.
Format is now pukka.
except for the surviving west tower which was built for William Bordall – could do with a comma after tower, to make the clause non-restrictive (i.e. descriptive rather than defining) otherwise there is the theoretical possibility that there are other surviving west towers that were built for someone else. Yes, I know, but it's as well to be as precise as possible,
Added.
and an exceptional one in the south chapel – who says it is exceptional?
Historic England (aka English Heritage), the citation immediately following; they call it "a very fine monument". Allowing for the dry style of official listings, a jaundiced eye, and
English understatement, that is a truly exceptional heap of praise. Repeated the ref just in case.
Industry
"drawdock" could do with a blue-link or explanation.
Linked.
Chiswick New Town
north-westwards – but you don't hyphenate southeast, southwest and northeast earlier. Either is fine, but it would be as well to be consistent.