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Further reading
Northamerica1000, please don't be satisfied with "
Further reading", which is usually nothing more than a fancy External links section. Please use those things as references for the prose in the text. (I am having bad flashbacks of chunks of "Further reading" sections all over those earlier Occupy articles.) Thank you,
Drmies (
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03:30, 13 April 2014 (UTC)reply
Thanks for your opinion. The links I added are in full compliance with
WP:FURTHER, and I've already merged one two into the article text after slightly expanding the article. Please be patient, because article expansion, finding and adding sources, adding inline citations, etc. takes time and energy to perform.
NorthAmerica100003:51, 13 April 2014 (UTC)reply
User:Drmies has removed content they deemed as promotional and needing sourcing from reliable sources, and performed some copy editing in the lead per neutrality concerns.
Some of the edits I have performed include:
Addition of new reliable sources to better-qualify
topic notability
Addition of more inline citations to
verify content
Formatted all sources and inline citations per
WP:CITE
This article could link to other movements, which are also important to the effectiveness of the Occupy SEC movement. This would really strengthen the credibility of this page.