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The lead provides context in terms of the position of the village, but doesn't really summarise the article (as suggested by
WP:LEAD). We jump from Roman to 20th century military use with nothing about the history of the manor etc.
I've expanded the second paragraph somewhat so it now includes the first mention of the village, and the bit about the manor being passed on by several families. JAGUAR21:14, 1 January 2017 (UTC)reply
It would be nice to give population figures for the village rather than the larger parish, but I recognise that may not be published.
Just noticed that User:Bob Henshaw
added that today, an hour before you took this review! I hadn't noticed it until now. Unfortunately I can't find specific population figures for the village itself, as the village comes under the a parish of another village. This is an unusual example, as it's uncommon for a whole-sized village to not have its own parish (I don't know many other examples). I've removed the one-liner about the 2011 census. JAGUAR21:14, 1 January 2017 (UTC)reply
History
The first three paragraphs seem quite comprehensive (largely based on the reliable VCH source)
Thanks. Although British History Online takes a while to decipher, it's sometimes usually the only comprehensive and reliable source for English villages. JAGUAR21:23, 1 January 2017 (UTC)reply
Agreed very useful but you might want to look at how it is referenced (ie A History of the County of Hampshire: Volume 3 & original publisher is Victoria County History. BHO is just reusing their content etc).—
Rodtalk08:26, 2 January 2017 (UTC)reply
Ah, I never thought of that. I've re-formatted the ref. Hope this looks OK. I can't use it as a harvref because I don't have access to the actual journal, and the website doesn't give out the precise page numbers. JAGUAR15:17, 2 January 2017 (UTC)reply
Ref 5 (for the RAF station) is to the BBC Domesday Reloaded site. I tend to avoid using this as it was user generated (even with some editorial control) and may not be considered reliable
I didn't know it was user generated, thanks for letting me know. I'll avoid it from now on. I've removed ref 5 and its accompanying sentence. Unfortunately I can't find any reliable sources on the RAF station's history. JAGUAR21:33, 1 January 2017 (UTC)reply
Ref 6 (Aviation Week & Space Technology) appears to be a journal so should give details of volume, issue page nos etc (ie Volume 147, Issues 14-24 ) see
Template:Cite journal
According to
this leaflet the village "is famous for its historic finds including Mesolithic implements and the massive Roman hoard (over11,000 silver pieces) that are now held by the British Museum" which might be worth a mention.
I could be doing this wrong as I've never done it before, but I checked
WP:UKVILLAGES and it states that "OS" is fully licensed, so I've replaced the Google maps ref
with this. It seems even more detailed than Google maps and confirms everything mentioned in the article. JAGUAR15:30, 2 January 2017 (UTC)reply
Just realised that the map I linked it to is from the 1940s! Which explains why it is no longer under copyright and why the town of Bordon didn't exist! I've instead replaced it with
OpenStreetMap, which is open licensed. JAGUAR15:34, 2 January 2017 (UTC)reply
"Length" and "long" are not both needed in "marking the overall length approximately 3.9 miles (6.3 km) long"
It took a while for me to find this, but I think I might be onto something. I'm not a fan of copy and pasting sections for various articles, but I could re-use the same climate section for all of the East Hampshire villages.
This is the climate data for most of the East Hampshire area, albeit from 1981-2010 (though it should be OK as I've used the same data for Portsmouth). I'll add that in the article and see how it goes. JAGUAR15:46, 2 January 2017 (UTC)reply
Additional sections/contentWP:UKVILLAGES suggests section on government (eg local authorities & parliamentary constituencies - the Westminster constituency could also be added to the infobox), Economy, Culture, Transport, Education & Sport. These could be added to help give a fuller description of the village.
I've added the Westminster constituency and dialling code in the infobox, but I don't think I can ever make an economy, culture or transport etc section for this village. Some villages nowadays don't have a sense of community, and the more seclusive ones don't have bus routes any more. I know that Oakhanger doesn't have a school, a bus route, or a main road of any sort running through it. I'm not sure what I can add? JAGUAR21:55, 2 January 2017 (UTC)reply
Added, thanks. It was originally in the article but now I know I shouldn't skip things when the article in question is lacking in detail. It's a tiny little shop that sells china ("our huge shopping halls are full of great ideas" is very misleading)! JAGUAR21:55, 2 January 2017 (UTC)reply
Re the church would the Northanger benefice or Diocese of Winchester be worth a mention see
here (could go in a religious sites section)
I've added a mention that it is in the Diocese of Winchester. Information on the church is sadly short as it is, so I'm not sure if I could make a religious sites section. The church itself hasn't even been restored or anything. JAGUAR21:55, 2 January 2017 (UTC)reply
External links
The link to information about the village from Selborne Parish Council is broken
All links to pages within Hampshire Treasures are broken
This is terrible. Along with British History Online, Hampshire Treasure was the only other reliable source I could use for any village. I've archived the first linked and made use of it in the history section, but removed the rest as it repeated information already mentioned. Maybe I should write and email and beg them to restore it... JAGUAR21:55, 2 January 2017 (UTC)reply
The link for stained glass windows is not clear but seems to be from a book about Norfolk
Removed. I must admit that I never checked this. The external links were added by another user years ago, and I usually ignore them. I'll be sure to check them from now on, to see if they're broken etc. JAGUAR21:55, 2 January 2017 (UTC)reply
Pictures
The two pictures are suitably licenced but the caption "Space satellite at RAF Oakhanger." could include "dish" or "receiver" or similar as it is not actually a satellite.
I think there is quite a lot which could be added to help make the article meet the
GA Criteria particularly: Broad in its coverage: it addresses the main aspects of the topic, but I think some of the other criteria are on their way to being met.—
Rodtalk16:42, 1 January 2017 (UTC)reply
@
Rodw: thank you so much for the review! I've attempted to address everything. I grew up in this village and have happy memories here, but I realise that the article is shorter than usual due to some lack of coverage. The church for example, has virtually no history and the village itself remains something of a grey area. I wrote this article and nominated for GA as part of a "trial run" to see how well I can write these village en masse, as my ultimate (albeit lofty) ambition is to promote every village and town of the East Hampshire district to GA. There are over a hundred articles in the navbox, but a lot of them are hamlets which I'll be forced to merge as it would be impossible to expand them beyond a two-sentence stub. I'm "learning the ropes" with this one so that I can make future GANs go more smoothly, if that makes sense. From now on I'll check the external links, add climate sections and make everything as comprehensive as possible. I'll probably write the shorter villages first, then save the more complex ones till last, but we'll see. Anyway, thanks again for taking this on! Please let me know if there's anything you think is missing. JAGUAR21:55, 2 January 2017 (UTC)reply
I know how difficult it can be to find sources to expand articles on small villages. I think this now achieves the "broad" criteria and I wish you luck with the other hundred.—
Rodtalk08:37, 3 January 2017 (UTC)reply