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References are good. I know not that much comes up for african stuff, so I'll let the numbers slide.
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cited inline. All content that
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I'll pass this — after this question: In reference number 5, did this information come from the excerpt or the actual thing?
I've gone through this article fixing the numerous typos and grammatical errors and removing the randomly sprinkled "however" and other redundancy. I couldn't fix The villages around the park are mostly homogeneous as there are few non-natives, mostly working as civil servants or traders since I was not sure whether it was the villagers or the non-natives who were in those occupations. I've changed all the bird links, since using the binomial is inconsistent with the mammals and creates unnecessary redirects. English names should be used anyway for vertebrates. If you wish, you can
check the changes.
jimfbleak (
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06:01, 10 September 2008 (UTC)reply
Thanks for your help! I have chaged thesentence to "The villages around the park are mostly homogeneous as there are few non-natives, most of which work as civil servants or traders." Regards --I'm an Editorofthewikicitation needed10:50, 10 September 2008 (UTC)reply
Hi, I've changed which to whom since it's referring to people. I had thought of doing the GA for this myself, but decided to review
Vogel State Park which had been waiting longer, so that's why I had a quick run through the article.
jimfbleak (
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11:13, 10 September 2008 (UTC)reply