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Though it's great that you've credited the source of the obituary, I think this article contains too much non-free content, most of which should be rewritten. It would also be very good to draw on more than one source. Perhaps the article's creator could have a go at rewriting? Gonzonoir ( talk) 08:56, 7 July 2009 (UTC)