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ProtoDrake: I am so sorry I still haven't started this yet, real life has gotten in the way, and when I'm on Wikipedia I'm usually doing something else. I promise it will be done soon.
JOEBRO6417:47, 3 November 2020 (UTC)reply
Finally, here's my review, @
ProtoDrake:. Again, I am so sorry for taking this long. I did some copyediting on my own, because I thought it'd be easier if I took care of that on my own. Here's what it stood out to me:
I think we should refer to Square, Platinum, and 8-4 as "it"/"its"/"which", not "they"/"theirs"/"whose". E.g. "... English dubbing was handled by Cup of Tea Productions, whowhich had previously..."
Did my best catching these.
"... features additional costumes, elements from the , ..." Uh, something's missing here
Whoops! My bad.
In the "collaborations" I'd add when the collaborations happened.
ProtoDrake, alright, it's a pass! And yeah there weren't as many points as I was expecting either. Might be because I made changes I assumed would be uncontroversial. Anyway, I'm adding this to the GA list.
JOEBRO6401:57, 11 November 2020 (UTC)reply