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I am not certain about this part “with a general consensus that it is a classic Steps song”. As someone who has never heard of Steps or their music prior to reading this article, this does not mean much to me. I think it would be better to replace this with a part on what aspects of the song were praised by critics.
All three critics called it a classic Steps song. If someone isn't familiar, then it's incumbent on them to do some further reading. You're only reading it because you're reviewing it, it's unlikely you'd ever come across this article as you've never heard of them. Most people reading it will have an idea of who they are to be reading it in the first place. —
Calvin999
I would revise this sentence (It's accompanying music video features a man and a woman who have had bad luck in their relationships meeting at a party in a night club and their luck turning around.) to avoid the repetition of the word “luck”.
For this part (Villa also wrote that the song "glowing ode to celebrating away the bad times”), I believe that you are missing something between “song” and “glowing”.
I would add a descriptive phrase in front of Lee Latchford-Evans to clarify that he is a member of Steps, as you have done with Ian “H” Watkins in a previous section.
Wonderful work with this. There is not much that needs improvement. Once all of my comments are addressed, I will be more than happy to promote this as a GA.
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