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I mostly edited the structure of some of the sections to better clarify what was being talked about, particularly the section titled Predation. I also hyperlinked a bunch of words that I thought would be helpful to have. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tommytrope ( talk • contribs) 18:45, 19 March 2024 (UTC)
I have conducted online research regarding the beetle and have added information to this article. I have concerned myself with the behavior of the beetle. I wrote a a lead section, included a more details regarding the description of the beetle, and added to the 'Distribution and habitat' discussion. I expanded on the information provided by the original author regarding the presence of the beetle in Oregon and the implication that that might have. I included a new paragraph titled 'Physiology', which explains the ground-dwelling nature of N. brevicollis. Furthermore, I included a paragraph titled 'Behavior' with the sub-paragraphs 'Breeding and lifespan' and Predation'. Then, I finished with including a paragraph on human interaction. In addition to providing the article with new information, I edited the citations of the previous author and included more images to convey the information being presented.
L.marcoymarquez ( talk) 17:13, 26 February 2024 (UTC)
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 16 January 2024 and 25 April 2024. Further details are available
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— Assignment last updated by L.marcoymarquez ( talk) 21:06, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
The result was: rejected by reviewer, closed by
Narutolovehinata5
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Created by L.marcoymarquez ( talk). Self-nominated at 16:08, 1 March 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Nebria brevicollis; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
As an emerging field of interest, researchers plan to conduct further studies in which a wider range of learning assays are tested to understand the cognition-personality relationships of N. brevicollis.and
Conditions of low food supply can negatively influence both the number of eggs produced and the viability of the eggs.If you can cite these, we are likely ready for DYK. (Note: Editor last edited on 19 March. Will be pinging and emailing.) Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 00:55, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
I thought this article seemed well written with great detail. I added links to some technical terms, whether for the first time or to usages earlier in the article. I also made several edits in various sections to sentence structure for improved clarity and reduced redundancy. I think that there should be additional information added to the food resources section, especially given that it has a subsection under it when the section has one sentence overall. I also think that the life history and behavior sections can be either condensed or divided into subsections. They contain long blocks of text that seem to go into too much detail regarding research studies with specific mentions to certain researchers. Perhaps, a research section with subsections for life history and behavior may be more appropriate. Owen Guo ( talk) 03:51, 22 March 2024 (UTC)