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The libelous bit about Julian Frank is unsupported by any facts and out to be sourced or deleted. Remember the highly-publicized bit about the guy who helped shoot JFK? Sure, Frank may be dead, but it would be nice to source this. I'll come back in a few days and remove that part.
I did a bit of poking around in the Times historical archive.. news reports support the fact that the investigation centered around Frank. I added a reference and expanded the article a bit.
Rhobite18:08, 23 April 2006 (UTC)reply
Flight 2511's flight plan called for it to fly south from of New York, to Wilmington, NC … I'm not sure about the grammar and punctuation here. I think you mean something like "Flight 2511's flight plan called for it to fly south of New York to Wilmington, NC, where it could veer east over the Atlantic Ocean".
The crew checked in with Wilmington Airport at 2:07 a.m, Missing the period after the "m" in a.m. I would also put "a.m." next to the 2:31. Finally, per
MOS:TIME we should either use a hard space with "2:07 a.m." or use {{nowrap|2:07 a.m.}} so that the time and the a.m. don't end up on different lines, depending on screen size. Sorry for being picky on these little things!
Aftermath
He called Wilmington airport to report… here we don't capitalize the "a" in airport when we do in the last paragraph of the Flight history section. I think in this context it is still a proper noun and should be capitalized.
The 2:45 a.m. and 7:00 a.m. in this section should use the {{nowrap}} template (or )
MOS:TIME again, here we have 02:300 A.M. and 02:38 AM, which should be 2:30 a.m. and 2:38 a.m., respectively, to be consistent with the rest of the article.
That concludes my review. Overall this article is pretty well-written, I think, and we should have no problem addressing the above concerns. I'll place the article on hold for now. — MusikAnimaltalk04:02, 21 November 2014 (UTC)reply
Response
Thank you for taking the time to review the article. I know it's a bit longer than the usual GA candidate.
"Flight 2511's flight plan..." — the 'of' following the from is definitely a typo; I also removed the comma after 'New York.' The sentence now reads: Flight 2511's flight plan called for it to fly south from New York to Wilmington, NC, where it would veer east over the Atlantic Ocean. Does that make more sense?
I added a {{nowrap}} around all time designations and normalized the notation to p.m. and a.m. for consistency.
Removed the link from Snow's Marsh. Some further research makes it seem like this is really just a swampy area in North Carolina, with little merit as a standalone article. At most it might merit a mention in the Kure Beach article, to which it is geographically adjacent, and which is already linked.
I am unsure if the Continental Bank does merit a link. The bank has been mentioned (without a link) in another article, under its proper local name of Banco Continental Cubano. The Spanish wiki also makes mention of it, but it does not have an article there either. I am unsure if this is due to the general lack of Cuban participation on the wiki's, or if it is defunct or regional or unimportant, etc. There are mentions of it in the memoirs of Cuban-Americans who fled the Castro regime, but little in the way of official literature, which could be taken to mean it had gone out of business prior to the proliferation of the internet (or a dozen other possible reasons.) I erred on the side of caution and removed the link from that as well.