Looking over
this discussion really got me thinking about my typical subject matter for GA reviews. Note that I've never reviewed a music article before, but I like this song so I'll give it a shot. I'll probably review it in the next day or two.
Ruby2010comment!02:27, 1 September 2011 (UTC)reply
GA review (see
here for what the criteria are, and
here for what they are not)
Sentences with quotes need citations directly at end of sentence (i.e. that one in the lead, ""a spirit staying with you after its death and haunting you until you actually wish that the spirit were gone because it won't leave you alone." and others)
Too many "It"s in second paragraph of Background section. When starting a new paragraph, re-identify the subject (i.e. "My Immortal" or something similar)
"My Immortal" is a song of pain and despair caused by the loss of a family member or very close friend and how it drove her to the edge of insanity.[13]" Drove who over the edge of insanity? Clarify. Plus clarify this is IGN's opinion (unless you have info or a direct quote from the song writer).
I think the "Alex Nunn of musicOMH" review should be put in chronological order. In fact, I think all of the song comparison reviews should be placed at end of paragraph. Just a personal preference thing though.
Too many "____ called it" in reception section. Change it up.
Interesting article. I'll place the article on hold for seven days while the above issues get looked at. Please respond here when you have finished. Thanks,
Ruby2010comment!03:08, 2 September 2011 (UTC)reply