"... 25 to 35 of which are on public display at either branch". Is that in each branch, or both branches together?
"MOBA was founded by Scott Wilson in 1994, when he shared a painting he found in the trash with his friends Jerry Reilly and Marie Jackson, who suggested they start a collection." What does "shared" mean in this context? Was it founded when he shared it or after he shared it?
"To complete the ambiance, bad music was piped out amongst the forest ...". Ouch! Can you rustle up a couple of dozen good copyeditors from anywhere? :lol:
"Dedham Community Theatre". Is it really spelled "theatre", not "theater"?
"... which was lifted off the wall and taken from the premises." How else would you steal a painting?
"the Trash Collectors Union in
Cambridge also donates what they have rescued from imminent demise as refuse." This just makes my ears bleed, They donate it as refuse? To say nothing of the grammar.
"MOBA does not collect art completed by children," So it does collect art started by children?
"Cash Peters identified five themes ...". Need to explain who Cash Peteres is, for instance: "Art critic Cash Peters ...".
"More recently MOBA has been experimenting ...". More recently than what?
"... the captions are mostly written by the Michael Frank and Louise Reilly Sacco". Is that a company name? Doesn't seem to make sense.
"share" in this context is like Barney the purple dinosaur likes sharing. Look at what I found? That's awesome! Thanks for sharing that with me!
For some odd reason, some places in New England are spelled with British spellings. This is why I do not live in New England. We civilized folk south of the Mason Dixon line have pork rinds instead.
Cash Peters is briefly introduced a couple paragraphs above.
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