Toolbox check -- No dab or external link problems.
Prose -- My usual copyedit but apart from that:
"The early chapter of the novel..." -- Sounds a bit odd, usually one would say "The early chapters" and, if it was just one, give the number or perhaps say "An early chapter".
Hi there Ian, Thanks for that - it looks much better indeed. I've done the two edits you noted (one of which was a typo). Cheers -
SchroCat (
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16:37, 16 October 2011 (UTC)reply
Actually we still have "The early chapter of the novel" and it's now grammatically incorrect with "centre" instead of "centres"... If you can just tell me if it's one early chapter or a number of early chapters that focus(ses) on his private life (I don't have a copy of the book on hand) then I'm happy to word it accordingly and you'll know hat I mean. Cheers,
Ian Rose (
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22:56, 16 October 2011 (UTC)reply