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Nominator: Epicgenius ( talk · contribs) 16:24, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Arconning ( talk · contribs) 16:53, 6 July 2024 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning ( talk) 16:53, 6 July 2024 (UTC)
- @ Epicgenius Here are my comments, hope they can be addressed. :) Arconning ( talk) 12:36, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
Prose and MoS
Lead and infobox
- The Midtown operated as a porn theater from, The Midtown operated as a porn theater in.
- Done. Epicgenius ( talk) 12:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Its owner Albert Bialek, commas after owner and the end.
- Done. Epicgenius ( talk) 12:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
Site
- No issues.
Architecture
- black-terracotta, remove hyphen.
- Done. Epicgenius ( talk) 12:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Similar to in the Variety Theater, omit in.
- Done. Epicgenius ( talk) 12:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- renamed from , omit from.
- In this case, the previous name was the Midtown Theater. It was renamed to the Metro Theater, so I just removed "from the Midtown Theater". Epicgenius ( talk) 12:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
Development to Recent years
- World War I and the beginning of the Great Depression., probably wikilink to
World War I and
Great Depression.
- Done. Epicgenius ( talk) 12:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- Brohall Realty, led, by Arlington C. Hall,, Brohall Realty, led by Arlington C. Hall,?
- Oops, I've fixed this. Epicgenius ( talk) 12:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
Post-closure
- In 2018, a local resident raised $4.000, I'm guessing this is supposed to be 4,000 lol
- Yep, it was. Epicgenius ( talk) 12:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- $900.000, this too.
- Done. (I should probably change my font, because commas look like periods in the font that I'm using). Epicgenius ( talk) 12:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- New York state, capitalized "State".
- "State" is lowercase here because "state" is technically not part of the name of the state (although, we do sometimes use "New York State" to refer to the state government). However, I've reworded it. Epicgenius ( talk) 12:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
- The Blink Fitness plan also did not proceed,, should be a period.
- Done. Epicgenius ( talk) 12:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
Impact
- Optional. and it also appeared, and has also appeared.
- I changed it to "and it has also appeared". Epicgenius ( talk) 12:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
Images
- Images have proper licenses and are relevant to the article.
Refs
- Earwig's okay!
- Random ref check: 1, 2, 6, 10, 12, 15, 17, 20, 25, 36, 48, 56, 71, 85, 96, 104. All good.
Misc
- No ongoing edit war, broad and focused information, neutral.
- Thanks for the review Arconning. I've now responded to all the issues you raised above. Epicgenius ( talk) 12:58, 8 July 2024 (UTC)
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