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I'm failing this GAN because of some problems with the content, specifically comprehensivesness

  • The article is almost wholly concerned with the results of the racing team. It does not discuss things such as
    • Budget
    • Structure of the team and roles of the technical staff in the team, especially as the engineering is bigger component of the success than any driver can be these days
    • Team politics, whether drivers are allowed to race freely etc
    • Information about the team's factory, research facilities, wind-tunnel, supercomputers etc, staff
    • Fan following/merchandise etc
  • There is also a recentism problem. The 2000s is twice as large as the other stuff
  • In the footnotes, 100-112 should be 100–112 and so forth
  • I think the comment about 1997 is slightly misleading about the team's pace, as JV let Hakkinen win at Jerez and in the race that Coulthar won, Williams were two seconds a lap faster but had mechanical failure and the other driver got bumped off at the first corner. Otherwise the history is well done

YellowMonkey ( vote in the Southern Stars and White Ferns supermodel photo poll) 03:08, 14 April 2010 (UTC) reply