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The article looks fundamentally pretty good. There are certainly some prose issues which I might expect to be picked up on, but that isn't too much of a problem for GA status and should be easy enough to deal with in a review. For instance, the article is currently inconsistent about whether "black" should be capitalised or uncapitalised (per
MOS:RACECAPS, either is acceptable, but we should be consistent within an article!). Another example: the paragraph beginning "Although the African-American educator..." seems very long to me, and might do better split (perhaps with a new paragraph beginning "When Greener left...")
There are a few more significant issues, though they should all be relatively easy fixes:
The lead seems very short to me: the article isn't very long, but you might consider adding a couple more sentences!
Two paragraphs do not end in a citation; at GA it is generally expected that all paragraphs in the body do so
Most of the claims I spotchecked look okay, but There is conflicting data on how many siblings she had, but most sources cite between seven and ten is not supported by either of the subsequent citations, neither of which mentions her siblings at all.
There are a few sources which I would query: is "The Historical Memory Recovery Channel" anything more than a self-published blog? Why is it reliable? Ditto "Chalkboard Champions". There's also a PhD thesis cited (ensure that use follows
WP:SCHOLARSHIP), and two different encyclopedia.com entries (encyclopedia.com seems to reproduce entries from other presumably reliable sources, but it's not clear to me what the source of these two entries is?)
The quotation at the end of the article would really be better worked into the section on Patterson's legacy than just left at the end like that.
Further reading generally comes after references/works cited.
Thank you very much for your time and trouble. I will certainly attend to all the points you mention before thinking of submitting. Thanks again!
Balance person (
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11:46, 31 May 2024 (UTC)reply
Thinking about the lead, its ordering seems to emphisize the least significant point (the context of her birth) not what she did, or (probably most important for a WP article) what makes her notable.
DMacks (
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15:02, 10 June 2024 (UTC)reply
Two things are coming clear to me! One is that it is very difficult to find sources for people who have done great things if they are long gone and were marginalised in their time by colour and gender. So I was attempting to get as wide a variety of sources as I could. Secondly, I need to learn more about what is an acceptable source for Wikipedia. Happy to learn this. So with this is in mind, having read the pages on reliable sources and following the prompts you suggested:
aubreylewis is indeed a single person.
theclio.com would do as a reference for the fact that Patterson's house is now on a walking tour. But otherwise I cannot find the original sources for what they state.
tuesdayforumcharlotte.org is a group forum and I think the forum members can write pretty much what they like for an article.
chalkboardchampions.org is a blog
So, should I strip out all these citations? I was mostly using them for variety so I would probably need to re cite certain parts using the reliable sources that I do have?
I think blackpast.org is OK, after having had another look; they do have an expert editorial board and they say they verify all submissions for accuracy before posting. Theclio.com says something similar but it's less clear how the vetting works. Given that you're just using it to say it's on a walking tour I think you can keep it, but I don't think it would be good enough for the higher standards needed if you were to take this article to
featured level. Blackpast.org might also be questioned at that level. I think the other four sources should probably be removed unless you can find other evidence indicating they are reliable.
Mike Christie (
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12:44, 6 July 2024 (UTC)reply
OK, looks good. I'll do spotchecks next; footnote numbers refer to
this version.
FN 13 cites "While in Washington D.C., Patterson lived with her sisters, Emma and Chanie, and her brother, John at 1532 Fifteenth Street Northwest. In the late 1880s, Patterson's parents came to live with them due to financial difficulties. Patterson was unable to travel to attend an Oberlin alumni event due to financial difficulties and family responsibilities." I don't have access to this source; can you quote the relevant passage for me?
FN 17 cites "In 1869 to 1871, Patterson taught in Washington, D. C., at the Preparatory High School for Colored Youth, known today as Dunbar High School. Dunbar was the first public high school for African Americans in the USA." Verified.
FN 14 cites "The influential abolitionist Lucy Stanton Day Sessions was a fellow Oberlin alumna alongside Mary Jane Patterson. Stanton graduated twelve years before Patterson but was not enrolled in a program offering the equivalent degree." Verified.
FN 11 cites "Henry Patterson, who as a child was friends with future US president Andrew Johnson". Verified.
Just the one quote needed for verification.
Reading through the article:
The lead is a bit short for an article of this length; can you expand it a bit?
"It was rare in the pre-reconstruction era of the
History of African-American education for both young African American men and women to get a good education": I would make this just "It was rare in the pre-reconstruction era for both young African American men and women to get a good education". If you want to keep the link to the article, I would suggest creating a
"See also" section at the end.
The quote from Terrell near the end of the article needs to have a citation attached to it, rather than just the inline parenthetical attribution it has now.
Hello Mike, Try as I might I cannot recover the source for FN 13 so have removed it. I will keep trying to remember how on earth I got access to it! The lead has been lengthened. The unnecessary link has been removed. The Terrell quote is now properly cited.
Glad you're finding it useful! I tweaked the Terrell citation a bit as I think the reader needs to know who said that, but that's the only change. I'm going to go ahead and pass this; congratulations.
Mike Christie (
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16:18, 7 July 2024 (UTC)reply
... that Mary Jane Patterson, daughter of a slave, was the first African American woman to gain a BA degree, having taken a 'gentleman's course'?
Source: Blakemore, Erin (2017-05-23)' How the Daughter of a Slave Became the First African American to Earn a Bachelor's Degree.' Time
ALT1: ... that Mary Jane Patterson was the first Black principal of a famous high school in Washington DC? Source: Stewart, A (2013) First Class: The legacy of Dunbar, America's first Black Public School. Chicago. Ill: Lawrence Hill Books p 32
Reviewed:
Improved to Good Article status by
Balance person (
talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Article was promoted to Good Article within the last couple of days, is easily long enough, well written and copiously referenced. In my opinion the original hook, about being the first to get a BA degree, is best - very interesting indeed. The fact is cited immediately after it, in the lead introduction, to a page hosted on the university website. If I was being picky I'd say the info about achieving a BA degree should be included in the main body of the article too, because the lead intro is normally a summary of the main article. But the GA reviewers didn't have an issue with this, so I'm happy to say good to go to the next stage.
Sionk (
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17:59, 9 July 2024 (UTC)reply