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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Reyes206, D.myo, Asmyse2, Mediamaven1, Kingtodor, Em.shek. Peer reviewers: Emmacrumpley, Cindi617!, Redheadchick46, Bguyon2, Flore407, Drooha2.
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This article is good at stating what Marwen's building is and details about the transformations the building has gone through.
Here is a source I found on this event: https://marwen.org/events/ev_landing
Also think about fixing their mission statement and describing it further rather then having a short statement and attempting to continue it with another idea that discusses the 24,000 people they help. It may be useful to add information about what Marwen does to raise money or fund their non-profit organization. Redheadchick46 ( talk) 02:01, 7 November 2017 (UTC)
Good start to adding information to the wikipedia page. I think that each section can be expanded on a bit more in general terms. Along with more sourced material. Consider adding more sections. Maybe get into the specific events they hold and what each event benefit, how much specific benefits usually gross, and how they try to target a specific audience for each event. Another thing to consider adding at the very end is a "how to get involved" section. This page is to help promote this non-profit and they are doing great things. After listing all the great things people might want to get involved after reading so link something like this -- https://marwen.org/students/learn-at-marwen/online-registration As far as your sources go, they are great secondary sources. They all seem to back up the information you expanded on well. Drooha2 ( talk) 15:40, 9 November 2017 (UTC)
Emmacrumpley ( talk) 01:02, 7 November 2017 (UTC)
Not so sure if there just isn't very much information available on Marwen but the content seems to be very short and limited. I think it would be great to elaborate on who started the program and what exactly prompted the creation of the program- some sort of backstory and information on the founders. In addition, I think it would be helpful to give information as to what kind of programs they have and the type of rhetoric that they teach there. It would also be interesting to know the type of artwork that the students create there, the age groups that the program is available to, and the application process of getting into the program(if any) or if it's available to anyone. Pictures would also be helpful, either of the building itself or any hands on/in-classroom type photographs. It may even be interesting to know the type of people that they employ, if they have art backgrounds or are volunteers, maybe even students interning, etc. Bguyon2 ( talk) 03:01, 7 November 2017 (UTC)