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Reviewer: Ajpolino ( talk · contribs) 21:14, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
Hi
Gonzo fan2007, clicked here thinking I'd be learning about Packers CEO Mark Murphy, but I'm happy to be educated on someone else's life. Will get through this review asap.
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21:14, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
1. Well-written:
In his last year of college, GlenOak won the 1979 WVIAC championship- I assume this is a typo and it's supposed to be West Liberty winning the WVIAC?
2. Verifiable with no original research:
His hobbies include playing racquetball and he has an interest in hand guns- it seems like we're on somewhat shaky ground saying what a 65-year-old man's hobbies are based on an interview he gave when he was 23. I'm not insisting we cut this, but I'm flagging my discomfort for you to consider.
3. Broad in its coverage
4/5. Neutral/Stable - Pass. 6. Illustrated - No images