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Not only does
lack a valid antecedent for "these", it also hints, as does
at the intent that the title eventually be changed to
All the crap i can find about any marine worm.
With some refs, tho, it might be good to list the phyla (or even lower taxa) that include only marine worms. I think the
polychaetes (an annelid class) are an example.
The "blood vessels" bit is not total nonsense (altho
(blood) veins are a subset of blood vessels -- and bluish BTW rather than red like the up end of
giant tube worms), but find a ref and and produce from it a paraphrase that uses encyclopedic language.
--
Jerzy•
t
05:15, 2 December 2009 (UTC)
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