"She voiced several characters in the animated series The Simpsons from 1999 until 2002, including Maude Flanders, Helen Lovejoy, Miss Hoover, and others, after the original actress for these characters departed from the show." Needs rephrasing
"Gaven went to Hackley Elementary School in Tarrytown, New York when she was young and at that time she was certain that she wanted to work in show business.[3]" Needs rephrasing (maybe "..." young; while there, she became certain that she wanted to work in show business.")
Well, we don't know if she became "certain that she wanted to work in show business" while she was at the school, so I don't think that rephrasing would work. I split the sentence into two instead.
Theleftorium(talk)14:21, 30 October 2011 (UTC)reply
Were there any notable negative reviews of her performance?
I've checked through every article that mentions "Marcia Mitzman" in
NewsBank's database and on Google News. The negative reviews featured in the article are the only ones I've been able to find.
Theleftorium(talk)14:21, 30 October 2011 (UTC)reply
I liked the addition of how she won the Tommy role. Is there other information out there that you could add in for her other roles?
For someone who's had such an exciting career, I wish the article had an image or two of Gaven (maybe an image of her performing). I know such images are difficult to come by though.