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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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... that South Sudanese politician Luigi Adwok's(pictured) deputy as regional Minister of Education was injured during 1972 student riots in
Juba? Source:
NYT
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FuzzyMagma: Article meets eligibility and length requirements for DYK. QPQ met. No issues with the picture. I went through and copyedited and rewrote parts of the article that were close to
WP:CLOP and not written in an encyclopedic tone. The paragraph in the article associated with the DYK hook needs work. It should be incorporated into the article better, written in encyclopedic tone and style, and reads like a copy-paste of the source. Fixed the hook.
I find it odd that a hook focuses on someone other than the subject of the nominated article, especially someone apparently so unimportant that he/she is not even named in the hook or the article.
Surtsicna (
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18:56, 21 August 2023 (UTC)reply
sadly I agree, can I withdraw the nom? Sorry for that but I cannot think of anything interesting and this have been dragging for ages with no sign of finding a good hook. Thanks everyone for trying
FuzzyMagma (
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19:28, 21 August 2023 (UTC)reply