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I know that my English is perhaps very bad; but I tried to add some summaries for the episodes. The summaries I made are a bit longer and are explanatory. But then
ElijahPepe changed everything, and now in the episode one it say that Miles decides to undergo cloning, which is a lie, since he didn't even know what was going to happen to him. So which one is more understandable,
this (ElijahPepe) or
this (Bradford)? In addition the summary of episode two is also not very clear, and it really is not what happens throughout the episode.--Bradford✉21:06, 19 October 2019 (UTC)reply
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Bradford: You wrote a fucking thesis paper on those summaries. 100 - 200 words is necessary enough. It's a brief summary, you can change the undergoing cloning part, but don't make it sound like "And then (whatever happens to him). And then". It reeked of grammatical errors and there should be no furries on a show I enjoy. "Purrrrfect"? You make the show sound super specific, down to the details of the office building. My new edits are a little short, but can be slightly expanded and contain *basic* information for a reader to pick up. I'm not reading through your other one, because it's just too long. Don't write in English if it's not good. It makes my job harder and people who read the article and speak English fluently are going to have a hard time.
ElijahPepe (
talk)
13:41, 20 October 2019 (UTC)reply
They are details that can be improved, but changing everything to place lies, they make no sense. In addition, YoungForever placed a template so that it can be summarized a little more. I had planned to continue adding summaries for the rest of the episodes, but I'm not used to summarizing.--Bradford✉13:54, 20 October 2019 (UTC)reply
If my "bad English" bothers you so much, then it is better not to place any summary. And leave the episode list as it was before, without any summary for the episodes, because you are affirming that in episode 1 Miles decides to undergo a process of DNA cloning, but that is a lie, because he did not know that that would happen.--Bradford✉13:59, 20 October 2019 (UTC)reply
Is that what I was intending? No, I didn't say that, and I didn't want to mean that. All you care about is that one mistake because it helps your cause.
ElijahPepe (
talk)
23:06, 20 October 2019 (UTC)reply
Well, I corrected Miles's employer once, but somebody doesn't like the correction, and put it back to the incorrect name. Watch the show, and look at signage in the lobby as Miles walks in (S1:E2, around the five-minute mark). Miles is employed by Pool Branding, which is a marketing/branding/PR firm. Hillston Telecom is a client of Pool Branding, and Miles is working on a campaign for this client. I'm not going to get into an edit-fight over something so trivial. Just leaving the correct information here, so someone else can use it. — Preceding
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2601:602:8480:3343:D06C:90CA:55AD:AF3F (
talk)
02:33, 4 December 2019 (UTC)reply
It's fixed. I just double checked it's "Pool Branding". Anyone can missed that even if they watched the TV series because "Pool Branding" wasn't even talked about in the TV series, the signage only lasted a few seconds in the background. Most people don't really pay attention to the background. —
YoungForever(talk)03:48, 4 December 2019 (UTC)reply