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And I've responded there. I think that "APG" should only be applied to classifications that were published with the author explicitly given as "Angiosperm Phylogeny Group", which means (so far) only the three papers setting out the APG system, the APG II system and the APG III system. A subset of APG members can't be said to speak for the APG as a whole.
Peter coxhead (
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13:19, 22 January 2016 (UTC)reply
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Changes to dates - it is not immediately obvious that an article is CS1 or CS2 - on editing the category list says it is actually CS1. I find CS2 dates clumsy and ambiguous, so maybe the best thing is to remove them. --
Michael Goodyear (
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18:03, 21 January 2016 (UTC)reply
The YYYY-MM-DD style for access dates is quite independent of CS1 and CS2 (which are essentially full stops versus commas between items); it can be used with either citation style (see
MOS:DATEUNIFY under "Access and archive dates"). I prefer CS2 for citations with YYYY-MM-DD for access/archive dates (and, yes, I know I'm in the minority); as per
WP:CITEVAR, the article should be kept in the style I used when I created and expanded it. "Clumsiness" is a matter of taste; I find YYYY-MM-DD elegant; they are not ambiguous in Wikipedia since only this precise format is allowed.
Peter coxhead (
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19:58, 21 January 2016 (UTC)reply
I should have checked to see who created the page! The ambiguity depends on whether the reader knows which is month and which is day. Maybe its just a matter of aesthetics that I prefer 21 January 2016 to 2016-01-21. --
Michael Goodyear (
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20:58, 21 January 2016 (UTC)reply
It probably is just aesthetics, although one advantage in Wikipedia is that YYYY-MM-DD is allowed for access/archive dates in both dmy and md,y articles, so if you cut-and-paste you only have to check whether to change {{cite ... }} to {{citation ... }} or vice versa and don't have to check whether "21 January 2016" should be changed to "January 21, 2016" or vice versa.
Peter coxhead (
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13:19, 22 January 2016 (UTC)reply
. Figure and text got separated in cladogram - fixed
. Edits to citation style left a whole lot of orphan references - any changes need to be made to both sfn and target. Due to intermediate edits they will all need to be repaired manually --
Michael Goodyear (
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21:07, 28 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Fixed. I see the problem - citations placed in bibliography but not yet cited in text got changed from cite web etc to citation which automatically generates a cite error message. If there is a cite without ref=harv that means it has not yet been used, so cannot be changed to citation. Given that the bibliography is now indexed, citation does not represent a major data loss. --
Michael Goodyear (
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21:46, 28 January 2016 (UTC)reply
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Michael Goodyear: I didn't see any error messages, but I know that it depends on how your preferences are set, so maybe mine aren't sufficiently inclusive. Un-cited citations don't normally cause errors – I use them all the time – so I don't understand.
Peter coxhead (
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16:25, 29 January 2016 (UTC)reply
Yes I recall a similar discussion earlier. In fact you had to revert a pedantic edit that tagged citations not yet incorporated into the text. As you have noticed, I do that all the time, in some ways like placeholders. It is not really a problem, it was just that I revisited the page to see a sea of red ink that was not there earlier in the day, and it took a long time to work out what triggered it and fix it. You see there are other editors who alas, have that preference set, and delight in deleting any reference with a cite error attached! I think we probably have different standards when it comes to style - given limited time resources I tend to stick with what works for me, such as the "In...". As far as I can see that comes down to what is italicised, and similarly the ps= which translates into use of terminal full stops. Cheers! --
Michael Goodyear (
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19:15, 29 January 2016 (UTC)reply
What I still don't understsnd is why it's an error to have a bibliographic item not used as an inline reference; this shouldn't be the case. I don't think it used to be.
Peter coxhead (
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21:50, 29 January 2016 (UTC)reply
still found in many books and other sources seems irrelevant.
The phrase occurs commonly in taxonomic works, and was inserted because of the general confusion as to what constitutes Liliaceae in the literature, since its size and composition has varied so greatly over time. --
Michael Goodyear (
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12:56, 2 March 2016 (UTC)reply
Oops, missed that one - reworded. The three major ingredients in the phylogenetic revolution were of course, molecular markers, cladistic theory and the computational methods to analyse large complex datasets. --
Michael Goodyear (
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13:01, 2 March 2016 (UTC)reply
I would prefer a quick glance across a horizontal gallery to scrolling through a vertical one. It would be fine to make this horizontal; in the last section you have a vertical one.
I suppose it depends on what you mean by "Gallery" I dislike the traditional gallery using HTML codes that fling every image they can find together at the end of the page. I try to dismantle them when I see them. Images shpould be relevant and illustrate the text, and therefore be as close to the text they illustrate as possible. Generally vertical formats work better for that provided they don't overflow. --
Michael Goodyear (
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19:14, 3 March 2016 (UTC)reply
"Flowers" are too common to be linked. You can link whorls, carpels and sedges.
I used to think that, now to be consistent I routinely link Flower, leaves, etc. The Flower page introduces morphological terms in context without being too specific. However I tweaked it to point specifically to morphology --
Michael Goodyear (
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15:23, 2 March 2016 (UTC)reply
What is meant by "anatropous" and "synapomorphy" ?
The use of technical botanical terms is alwayas difficult - to define "anatropous" would introduce yet more terms like micropyle. What I did originally was to add a description of anatropous to ovule and then link to ovule. However I have now tweaked the sentence, added "orientation" and a direct link to the Glossary which in turn links to wikitionary! --
Michael Goodyear (
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16:12, 2 March 2016 (UTC)reply
I can, but in the context I don't think it helps. Again, when I wrote this, I rewote the
Tapetum article to include this. So I have restructured the latter page to emphasise the terms. --
Michael Goodyear (
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16:29, 2 March 2016 (UTC)reply
The Taxonomy section is a masterpiece! And the way you elucidate such an intricate topic (at least for someone like me who is slightly into taxonomy and phylogeny) in such a thorough, storylike manner deserves a thousand appreciations! Seriously, you must take this to FAC! This is the professional quality it takes.
was the tribe Petaloideae, that is all monocots except grasses and sedges, which were classed as tribe Glumaceae Not sure what this means. Do you mean the grasses and sedges were excluded from Petaloideae but included in Glumaceae? The meaning is not apparent at first.
'Hence the concept that there was a natural grouping...hence "lilioid monocots". Source?
This is an informal grouping and it has been an incredibly difficult task to trace the history of the usage. I am giving it to Heywood as the most most useful source in this regard. --
Michael Goodyear (
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12:37, 3 March 2016 (UTC)reply
You have to identify Kron. It would be good to give the full name of Chase.
Not sure I follow. It is fairly standard to refer to a particular study by the authors, in this case Kron and Chase (1995). As it happens we have a page on mark Chase, to which I linked, but we don't have a page on every single author although I have added many. Kathleen Kron is not particularly notable. The phrase is followed by the citation to their work. To avoid any confusion I moved the citation so it comes after their names. --
Michael Goodyear (
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12:37, 3 March 2016 (UTC)reply
Let me clarify. If we suddenly add unidentified names, this may be objected to at the FAC - I tell you now as I have received similar comments even at GAN! There is nothing wrong in what you say, but there is no harm in adding a word or two. The et. al. style may also raise concern. For Kron here, I found that she is from
Wake Forest University. You simply have to say "As Kathleen A. Kron (I use full names when I introduce people first, not mandatory) (of
Wake Forest University) and Chase stated..." Does not matter if she is notable or not.
Sainsf<^>Talk all words02:55, 3 March 2016 (UTC)reply
Interesting discussion. I will think about it without adding clutter. When people object to something, they need to be able to point to some rule, guidance or manual to back up their POV. So far I have not found one on this, but will keep digging. I know who she is, but I'm not sure is helpful to add it. If we were talking about an authority passing an opinion, that woud be very different as opposed to the author of a scientic journal article. --
Michael Goodyear (
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19:27, 3 March 2016 (UTC)reply
was confirmed, namely that I think a hyphen would do better.
As a reply to all the comments in this section: I got a lot to learn from this. Of course, you know better for the article and no GA level issues stand out here. So the above issues are done.
Sainsf<^>Talk all words19:18, 3 March 2016 (UTC)reply
Phylogenetic era
Done
but because their data contradicted morphological phylogenies, were reluctant to draw definite conclusions as to the monophyly of lilioids. Could be made into another sentence.
Duplinks: alismatids,dioscoreoids,Acorus,Stemonaceae, Iridaceae and Orchidaceae
Alismatids only mentioned in lead, Dioscoreoids only once in this section, Acorus removed, only one link to Stemonaceae 9the other was stemonoids), Iridaceae removed --
Michael Goodyear (
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13:04, 3 March 2016 (UTC)reply
This included the removal of two tribes "This" should be replaced by "these" unless "this" refers to the superorder and not the changes.
Pronouns refer back to the previous noun, in this case "this" referred to the analysis, but I agree it more properly refers to modifications, and is therefore plural. Changed, although one could equally argue that it refers to "removal" and therefore singular. --
Michael Goodyear (
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14:48, 3 March 2016 (UTC)reply
I think we should give the full name of Kubitzki, Rudall and Judd. We are identifying them for the first time.
Interesting point, but the reason I have not "introduced" them is that I am not talking about them, but using their names as a short cut for work they have written. In all cases they have been linked, and their work linked to them in addiion, where WP has biographies - I added many. --
Michael Goodyear (
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15:32, 3 March 2016 (UTC)reply
Could we introduce Reveal? I don't think "&" is needed.
See above - this is a technical term - sensu Chase & Reveal, means according to the circumscription used in the Chase & Reveal scheme, to distinguish it from other circumscriptions of the same name. See for instance sensu Dahlgren. --
Michael Goodyear (
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15:38, 3 March 2016 (UTC)reply
To be consistent I have to say that who they are is not directly relevant, their names are simply to differentiate the articles cited in that sentence, otherwise one might have to say "a study showed" or some such. It is just a bit more informative. --
Michael Goodyear (
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18:41, 3 March 2016 (UTC)reply
Is this section not placed far too behind? We have discussed such intricate taxonomy before this, so this section would appear redundant here. Could this be placed in the beginning of Taxonomy?
Interesting question. This article follows the plant template of Wikiproject Plants, as it should. That template works down the hierarchical ladder. The early sections deal with the inception of the taxon or assemblage of taxa, its circumscription within higher groupings and relationship to other taxa at the same level. Following that it specifies treatment of the subordinate taxa of the article in question, hence "Subdivision" --
Michael Goodyear (
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18:45, 3 March 2016 (UTC)reply
The "Comparison with other monocot orders" is interesting. Here I find that the five orders have distinctive features of their own. This would be great if the facts could be placed under or immediately after Description.
This is a general check on the sources, and also a bit deep if you plan an FAC for your work.
The bibliography is really good in its quality and quantity!
Glover, Beverley J. (2014) [2007] What do two years refer to here?
That is WP citation style. Where there is a later edition it places that date in (), and "first published" in []. The cite templates generate that. If you look in the wikitext you will see the code origyear=2007 --
Michael Goodyear (
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18:58, 3 March 2016 (UTC)reply
A slight consistency will be needed for the locations. You go for any one of "city" or "city, country" or "city, state, country" formats.
A slight consistency will be needed for the names. You go for either the "Caddick, Lizabeth R." or the "Caddick, L. R." format.
Another interesting question. These citations are largely generated by cite templates that use doi and isbn. Therefore they incorporate the information as provided by the publisher. With reference to names, different journals use different house styles as to how to display the names of authors and they pass these on to the cite templates. It is customary to display the names in the citation as published and it reduces confusion in sarching for the original. However, it is also the reason I use authorlink= where possible, since that tells you who the author actually is! You can see why people get very excited on the Manual of Style talk page, where some people place enormous weight on nuances. However MOS does state that this is not a scientific pournal! --
Michael Goodyear (
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19:06, 3 March 2016 (UTC)reply
There should be a statement to specify at which point in research the Lilioids were explicitly found to be paraphyletic with regards to the commelinids.
The "Phylogenetic Era" and APG sections could probably be greatly clarified with a couple small trees showing the evolution of understanding.
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