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Nominator: LunaEclipse ( talk · contribs) 12:08, 16 May 2024 (UTC) reply

Reviewer: Pollosito ( talk · contribs) 02:40, 17 May 2024 (UTC) reply

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.

   a ( reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c ( OR): d ( copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a ( major aspects): b ( focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b ( appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Hi, @ LunaEclipse. I think I'll be reviewing the article at the end of the month, although I want that to happen sooner. My apologies for that. Best, Santi ( talk) 02:40, 17 May 2024 (UTC) reply

Pollosito, take your time, I won't mind at all. —  🌙Eclipse ^{( talk) ( contribs)} 14:47, 19 May 2024 (UTC) reply

Lead

• I suggest you move the present source to the body of the article. Refs in this section only apply if it's too short or one paragraph long. Santi ( talk) 14:18, 3 June 2024 (UTC) reply

 Done 🌙Eclipse ^{( talk) ( contribs)} 11:35, 6 June 2024 (UTC) reply

• As "Wilburn Holding Co." isn't an alternative name for the song, please remove bold text. Santi ( talk) 04:54, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Background

• It seems absurdly short to me. Could you put information about the album it belongs to? In articles about songs they usually do that. Santi ( talk) 13:52, 3 June 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Done. 🌙Eclipse ^{( talk) ( contribs)} 14:10, 3 June 2024 (UTC) reply
• The ref 2 doesn't mention that "First Person Shooter" is part of For All the Dogs. Although I know it is out of a sense of logic, at least I would prefer to verify those specific details. Santi ( talk) 14:16, 3 June 2024 (UTC) reply

 Done 🌙Eclipse ^{( talk) ( contribs)} 11:35, 6 June 2024 (UTC) reply

• Record producer Metro Boomin announced a collaborative album with rapper Future in an interview by Flaunt Magazine, set to release in 2023. He had saved a few tracks he produced for the latter for the album. First, I see in the reference that it says only "collaboration", not "collaborative album". Second, I don't see any mention of saved tracks, or I got lost from reading so much (I almost fell asleep, in fact, I'm not in my season of wanting to read LOL). Santi ( talk) 17:55, 3 June 2024 (UTC) reply

 Done 🌙Eclipse ^{( talk) ( contribs)} 11:35, 6 June 2024 (UTC) reply

• @ Pollosito: I have addressed your comments, you may continue with the review. lunaeclipse ^{( talk)} 20:25, 14 June 2024 (UTC) reply

  @ LunaEclipse: Thank you for remembering. I will address the article at the same time as the other one I am reviewing, but not today, because I am on my cell phone, and it is hard for me to manage Wikipedia with that and that is why I hate it. Santi ( talk) 22:27, 14 June 2024 (UTC) reply

• Is there a better reference to confirm the trailer other than the trailer itself? Santi ( talk) 02:18, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply
  •  Done lunaeclipse ^{( talk)} 23:41, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply
• It would be a good idea to put information about the tracklist and what position it was there. Santi ( talk) 02:18, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply
  •  In progress lunaeclipse ^{( talk)} 23:41, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply
• Archiving mising: ref 1, 4, 5, 6 and 8. Santi ( talk) 02:18, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply
  •  Done lunaeclipse ^{( talk)} 23:41, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply
• Pipe Revolt to Revolt (TV network). Santi ( talk) 02:18, 17 June 2024 (UTC) reply
  •  Done lunaeclipse ^{( talk)} 23:41, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ Pollosito: I apologize for not addressing these earlier. Was busy reading Homestuck. lunaeclipse ^{( talk)} 23:41, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

@ LunaEclipse: No problem. I'm also busy, but in finishing high school and in this FAC LOL. Santi ( talk) 23:43, 21 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Comments

• @ LunaEclipse: I believe in you. However, this article really has many problems with original research covered by a misleading prose. Sorry, but I don't think it should be a good item under the state it is in. I prefer to give you a month to base yourself on other new GAs to improve this one, and then you ping me and we continue with the review. Santi ( talk) 03:22, 9 July 2024 (UTC) reply