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Freikorp (
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23:16, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
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Is it reasonably well written ?
"James reveals that the woman they saw him kissing was Rachel's biological mother" - now I'm confused; so does Rachel have a non-biological mother, presumably the woman whom James is cheating on? How does Rachel not know who her biological mother is?
She was adopted, and this being a story twist, I don't know how to clarify other than specifying with "biological ".
Solved the problem.
Cognissonance (
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14:48, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
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"the developer's proprietary StoryForge tools" - what does this mean? As in, what do StoryForge tools do?
I added the abstract functions of StoryForge, as going too much into detail would be redundant IMO.
"criticised plotholes" - can you give me an example of a plothole? I think the article could benefit from mentioning one
Critics avoided spoilers, so quotes like
"logic holes big enough to drive Chloe's truck through" only amount to general statements.
"Most Touching Moment" - can you indicate what this moment was?
Done.
Is it factually accurate and
verifiable ?
A. Has an
appropriate reference section :
B. Citation to reliable sources
where necessary :
C.
No original research :
Is it broad in its coverage ?
A.
Major aspects :
B.
Focused :
Is it
neutral ?
Fair representation without bias:
Is it stable ?
No
edit wars , etc:
Does it contain
images to illustrate the topic?
A. Images are
tagged with their
copyright status , and
valid fair use rationales are provided for
non-free content :
B. Images are provided if possible and are
relevant to the topic, and have
suitable captions :
Overall :
Pass or Fail: Fantastic work on this article. Looking forward to passing it once minor issues are addressed.
Freikorp (
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13:43, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
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Freikorp : Thank you very much. I've responded to your concerns above.
Cognissonance (
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14:38, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
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I'm very happy with your changes. Passing this now. Well done.
Freikorp (
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23:32, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
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