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GA assessment
Unfortunately, I had to fail this outright, simply because the style wasn't very good, mainly in the route section. 1-2 sentence paragraphs a GA does not make. Fix these and you can certainly resubmit it for consideration.
Wizardman01:46, 21 October 2007 (UTC)reply
This is a nice article, very close to GA. I don't see that the short sentences in the Route section are at all a matter for concern; they map nicely onto the route itself. There are a few minor MOS issues, but they're easily fixed.
I do have a very few other comments though:
"... the path was relaunched on 26 September 2006". I'm not sure about this. How can a path be "launched"?
"The Leeds Country Way is a circular long-distance footpath ... It follows footpaths ...". So it's a footpath that follows a footpath?
"Here there is a glimpse of a small village, not marked on any map, which is the set for the TV series Emmerdale ..." I'm left dangling with that. Is it a real village, or a set for Emmerdale?
"The river is followed downstream ...". Best to keep it all active I'd suggest: "The path follows the river downstream ...".
"The path from Carlton ..". Perhaps better would be "From Carlton, the path ..."?
"celebrated maypole" sounds like POV without a supporting reference.
"From here the path skirts south of West Ardsley, and reaches Woodkirk with its historic church, on the A653. The ruins of Howley Hall (built 1590 for Sir John Savile) are passed before dropping down to reach Scotchman Lane." I think this bothers me because the first sentence is written from the point of view of the path, but the second seems to be taking the point of view of the walker. I'm probably being too picky about that though ... —Preceding
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22:39, 23 October 2007 (UTC)reply
Overall, I think this article well deserves to be listed as a GA once those few small issues are addressed.
I think we've between us addressed all these points (I hit an edit conflict at one point while we were both acting on it). Thanks for the comment about the maypole - I found a good ref and a non-POV description! How does it look now? (Will get back to it tomorrow - no more for now). Thanks for your help and kind words. (I thought the ref re Emmerdale clarified the status of the village, but have made it clearer now.)
PamD22:56, 23 October 2007 (UTC)reply
Blimey, you don't let the grass grow under your feet! It's such a pleasure to work with a committed and responsive editor like yourself, on what can sometimes seem to be an unnecessarily stressful review process. I've got absolutely no hesitation at all now in
listing this article as a GA. I look forward to reading many more of your contributions in the future. --
Malleus Fatuarum23:01, 23 October 2007 (UTC)reply
I know it's probably a nit-pick but the route specifically follows public Rights of Way (in rural areas) and footpaths/roads in urban areas. A Public Right of Way is deemed different from a footpath in that the ROW may be a Bridleway (with horse & bycycle access) or may indeed be a route open to all traffic.
The reference to 'launched' should really be re-launched as the route was changed (as mentioned in the article) to fall entirely within the Leeds Metropolitan boundry. Rather confusingly the Ordnance Survery Explorer Maps of 2006 show both the old & new routes. —Preceding
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20:07, 17 October 2010 (UTC)reply
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Photographs along the route would be useful Done
Map/diagram would be useful
Requires inline references adding using one of the {{Cite}} templates
Last edited at 10:35, 20 September 2007 (UTC).
Substituted at 21:48, 29 April 2016 (UTC)
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After quickly skimming the article, I am concerned that the article does not meet the
good article criteria anymore. Some of my concerns are listed below:
There are several uncited paragraphs.
The history section is quite short. Can this be expanded upon?
Any commentary about the reception of this footpath? What do people think about this route?
The lede is quite short. I would expect it to be longer.
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The joy of all things: I won't nominate this for GAR if work is ongoing. If there aren't improvements when I check back in a couple months, I will nominate to GAR. If the article meets the GA criteria, feel free to ping me.
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