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Split off the reception information to second paragraph and try to expand the wordings and perhaps remove the citations and transfer them to the reception section, but you have make an opening statement first on reception.
Since his introduction, Larry has received highly positive critical response, being highlighted as relatable,[1][2] and has been described as a breakout character. I don't see this phrase is a good one, but you can try at least to change perhaps?
Concept
I assumed there are no sources about his concept that are available, but you candn add info about voice actor
[1]. Also, add the vooce actor in the infobox image.
Appearances
I feel like this section is a bit flimsy. Did he appear in Anime? try to expand if you can.
Reception
Add an opening statement and relocate the citations from lead into here like I said above.
"TheGamer Ben Sledge posited" I'm not familiar what is posited is, or it is a typo? also the breakout info could be possible to relocate here.
blandness and lack of uniqueness. I don't see neither game rant and Automaton source mention his personality?
All issues are resolved except the lead, maybe try to remove citations on lead and put it at reception for consistency on other pokemon articles. Only if you can, not really a big deal anyway. 🥒
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