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Reviewer: Steelkamp ( talk · contribs) 17:02, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
Hello. I will be conducting a review of this article against the good article criteria. I aim to start this review tomorrow. Steelkamp ( talk) 17:02, 30 January 2022 (UTC)
Well written
vehicles built from 1905 through 1916 by the Lambert Automobile Company as American vehicles.That's a weird way to say it. It would sound better and be more informative if you changed it to
vehicles built from 1905 through 1916 by the Lambert Automobile Company in Anderson, Indiana, United States.Then you could remove the sentence saying
The automobile was manufactured from a factory in Anderson, Indiana.Steelkamp ( talk) 13:44, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
The Lambert automobile was a spin-off from a previous automobile that was being manufactured by another automobile company founded John William Lambert.Should that be founded by John William Lambert? Also, automobile is said three times in that sentence. At least one should be removed through rewording. Steelkamp ( talk) 13:44, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
Union Automobile changed its name to the Lambert Automobile. I thought the Lambert Automobile was a spin off, meaning the original company was still active. I think this section should be elaborated on further. Steelkamp ( talk) 13:44, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
More to come. Steelkamp ( talk) 13:44, 1 February 2022 (UTC)
When the war ended so did the Lambert automobile as production of the car was never resumed.This is pedantic I know, but couldn't it be said that the Lambert automobile ended when the US entered the war? Steelkamp ( talk) 15:30, 18 February 2022 (UTC)
The high end Lambert chassis integrated a three-point suspension to save driving power.Does high end mean all Lambert chassis were high end, or is this referring to a subset that were high end? This could be reworded to make it clearer. Steelkamp ( talk) 15:30, 18 February 2022 (UTC)
Verifiable with no original research
Broad in its coverage
Neutral
Stable
Illustrated, if possible
Sorry, I will get back to you soon. Steelkamp ( talk) 11:35, 5 February 2022 (UTC)