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Disclosure: I am an employee of LSU Health Shreveport, which is why I have an interest in this page. I would like to suggest a few updates for consideration by editors to expand the article and keep it current. First, to include basic company information such as website, address, names of professional schools located at LSU Health Shreveport, name of current Chancellor and number of employee and students [1]. Second, to add details about a major recent event: entering a new teaching hospital partnership with Ochsner Health System. Reference: [2] and [3] and [4]. Thank you for the consideration. If I have missed a step in the protocol to submit an edit for consideration, please let me know how I can correct. Bella101917 ( talk) 00:56, 11 October 2018 (UTC)
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Kindly rewrite your edit request so that it aligns more with the second example shown in the collapsed section above, and feel free to re-submit that edit request at your earliest convenience. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards, Spintendo 04:52, 11 October 2018 (UTC)
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Disclosure: I am an employee of LSU Health Shreveport, which is why I have an interest in this page. I would like to suggest a few updates for consideration by editors to expand the article and keep it current. Please see below.
Type | Public |
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Established | 1965 |
Chancellor | G. E. Ghali, DDS, MD, FACS, FRCS(Ed) |
Employees | 2,667 |
Students | 1,451 |
Alumni | 7,780 |
Location | Shreveport, Louisiana, USA |
Affiliation | LSU System |
Professional Schools | School of Medicine, School of Allied Health Professions, School of Graduate Studies |
Website | http://www.lsuhscshreveport.edu/ |
Sources for infobox: [1] [2] [3]
Bella101917 ( talk) 15:26, 11 October 2018 (UTC)
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Regards, Spintendo 18:37, 11 October 2018 (UTC)
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COI Disclosure: I am an employee of LSU Health Shreveport, which is why I have an interest in this page. I would like to suggest a few updates for consideration by editors. Please see below.
Addition to History Section:
Dr. G. E. Ghali was named Chancellor of LSU Health Shreveport in October of 2016 [1]
Proposed New Section: Research
LSU Health Shreveport is home to three Centers of Excellence designated by the Louisiana Board of Regents: Feist-Weiller Cancer Center, Center of Excellence for Arthritis and Rheumatology, and Center for Cardiovascular Diseases and Sciences. [2]
One of eight St. Jude Children's Research Hospital Affiliate Clinics in the country is located at Feist-Weiller Cancer Center in Shreveport. [3]
In January of 2018, Dr. Chris Kevil, Vice Chancellor for Research, was awarded a five-year, $10.5 million Centers of Biomedical Research Excellence (COBRE) grant by the National Institute of General Medical Science to fund the Center for Redox Biology and Cardiovascular Disease. [4]
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Established | 1965 |
Chancellor | G. E. Ghali, DDS, MD, FACS, FRCS(Ed) |
Medical Students Enrolled | 508 [5] |
Location | Shreveport, Louisiana, USA |
Affiliation | LSU System |
Professional Schools | School of Medicine, School of Allied Health Professions, School of Graduate Studies [6] |
http://www.lsuhscshreveport.edu/ |
Bella101917 ( talk) 15:34, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
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Regards, Spintendo 16:53, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
I hope I'm doing a reply right! Thank you Spintendo ( talk) for reviewing. I believe I understand correctly on the sources being apropos and can improve those to be stronger. Would it be possible to add the post-nominal titles for G.E. Ghali? It would be G. E. Ghali, DDS, MD, FACS, FRCS(Ed) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bella101917 ( talk • contribs) 20:40, 19 October 2018 (UTC)
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One of eight St. Jude Children's Research Hospital Affiliate Clinics in the country is located at Feist-Weiller Cancer Center at LSU Health Shreveport. [1]
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