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![]() | On 22 January 2023, it was proposed that this article be moved to 2023 Enoch killings. The result of the discussion was moved to Killing of the Haight family. |
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Lets be reasonable....There are tons of newspaper articles that use this picture and that provides proof what the family looks like. Instead of deleting it why don't you wait for a consensus or provide proof that it is not the family picture? If all the pictures of the family are not proof what do you need? This is lame to even discuss that there is no proof this is the family. If there is no proof then how about there being no proof that any of this is true? We will restore it while we see if any agree with you of its removal. https://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-11603183/Michael-Haight-accused-killing-seven-members-family-including-five-children-Utah.html?fbclid=IwAR0UWLJmjo4PzR9OKGao8Em0cF1FqTXQ6-2Vb4Omrr-DfFRyvN64IaZlzOM Johanneum ( talk) 15:42, 7 January 2023 (UTC)
The result of the move request was: moved to Killing of the Haight family. ( closed by non-admin page mover) The Night Watch (talk) 00:40, 30 January 2023 (UTC)
2023 Enoch, Utah shooting → 2023 Enoch killings – Usually only the city is listed in such titles. Jax 0677 ( talk) 00:23, 22 January 2023 (UTC)
I tagged the lead section as having extra information that is not in the article. Currently it is written more like a news style report that teases the reader to read on. Significant details - like earlier domestic violence reports to the police - are omitted from the lead. Domestic violence like this is not a one-off out-of-the-blue incident, it has precursor episodes that indicate increased risk. An impending relationship break-up is one factor that increases the risk of fatal events like this. The article needs to be rewritten so that the precursor facts appear in the article in a chronological order before the shooting is covered. It should not simply regurgitate what the police have uncovered in their investigation and reporters are reporting as the investigation proceeds. Police and reporters come at these sorts of events backwards starting from the now and working back into the past. Familicide article like this one need to be written more like biographies but of the whole family, with things put into chronological order. - Cameron Dewe ( talk) 02:55, 22 January 2023 (UTC)