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There is a lot of information in this article based on primary sources (police documents, statements given to police, etc.). While primary sources are allowable, secondary sources should be added to support claims, especially when there is potential for BLP issues. T.C.Haliburton talk nerdy to me 15:40, 28 February 2016 (UTC)
Seems a WP:BLP nightmare aimed at retrying a murder case in excruciating detail, and including persons who are not reasonably included, and timelines of no value to Wikipedia users. I have done some trimming, but this is still a mess. Collect ( talk) 18:22, 5 March 2016 (UTC)
The main problem with this article is that there are a number of factual errors. There are references cited, but the information is often either misinterpreted, or simply incorrect. Some examples:
"Families living within Rothesay, such as the Olands, the Irvings, the McCains, and the Crosbys, are considered "old money," claiming some of Canada's highest incomes per capita." The McCains are not from Rothesay, they are from Florenceville. The source cited does not even mention the McCains.
"McCloskey was later accused of suggesting that other officers lie under oath about his presence at the crime scene" This is inaccurate, the reference cited indicates that the Deputy Chief suggested this to one officer, not "officers".
"Shortly after being notified of the death, members of the Oland family, including Richard's wife Connie Oland, daughters Lisa Bustin and Jacqueline Walsh, and son Dennis Oland, arrived at the police station to give interviews and formal statements." This is inaccurate, the police came first to Connie and Richard Oland's home, where the family was gathered, where they were informed of events, and family members later went to the police station to be interviewed.
"Dennis said that in his teens, he had a complicated relationship with his father, but he believed this was due to his father being ex-military.". Richard Oland was not "ex-military" (Richard's father was). — Preceding unsigned comment added by 156.34.243.230 ( talk) 00:16, 6 March 2016 (UTC)
I see the timeline has been removed - this is a big improvement. I was just starting to go through the inaccurate and false statements in this timeline. Very good! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 156.34.243.230 ( talk) 00:20, 6 March 2016 (UTC)
This is incorrect: "There was a backdoor 3 steps away from where Richard's body was found, leading to an alleyway that could have been an exit." This back door (not "backdoor") is in the foyer outside what was Richard Oland's office, not inside the office "3 steps away" from where the body was found. Beyond the back door are three steps that lead to the alleyway behind the building. This is clear in the reference cited, as well as in others cited by this article. This article still has many factual errors and misinterpretations of cited references - it is not only the case that there are things that are factually incorrect, there are things that directly contradict the references that are cited. Is there some kind of WikiPedia "tag" that can be added to this article to indicate that the article contains factual errors and misuse of citations? This article is about an ongoing legal case; allowing false and misleading information seems like something the WikiPedia community should not permit.
I don't normally comment on tone, but this reads like work of a failed true crime writer. It is not very encyclopedic. Also, many relevant details about the victim and his career should be in the article about him, not here. Verne Equinox ( talk) 18:27, 22 October 2019 (UTC)
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