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"The film was based" -don't we use present tense for films? It is a lost film though so I guess..
"invest on the production house" -on?
"However, some of Nataraja Mudaliar's relatives objected to it for they felt that it was not a proper story for his debut venture.[1] But " -never good to have However and but following each other
"The production for the film cost ₹35,000,[a] which was then considered high, revealing Nataraja Mudaliar's inexperience in filmmaking.[1]" -not sure how that reveals his inexperience, you mean that he wouldn't haven known how much filmmaking would cost? Seems a bit OR, is that in the source?
"Later a difference of opinion arose between him and his investors." -vague, can you elaborate?
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I noticed this article was listed on
WP:GOCE/REQ and I've got one idea as to something that could be reworded (I don't think I would be able to copyedit to a high enough standard to do the full article):
In 1923, the death of his son in a fire which also burned his entire studio led Nataraja Mudaliar to retire from filmmaking. I think this'd work better if it were written as Nataraja Mudaliar retired from filmmaking in 1923 as a result of a fire that killed his son and burned his studio. or In 1923, a fire resulted in the death of his son and the destruction of his studio. Nataraja Mudaliar subsequently retired.