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Reviewer: Esprit15d ( talk · contribs) 15:16, 25 October 2017 (UTC)
I just completed a peer review of this article and then noticed is was a GA nom. If you address this part:
In this sentence, "Between the end of the 1980s and beginning of the 1990s, Mattea began touring as a headliner for the first time, in addition to performing on the Grand Ole Opry," these are things you do on a single occasion, not over time. So it should be something like, "In May of 1985, she began touring as a headliner and performing at the Grand Ole Opry." Either that, or take out "began." In the phrase "an all-star rendition," all-star feels POV.
...then I'll pass it.--Esprit15d • talk • contribs 15:16, 25 October 2017 (UTC)