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"daughter of Catherine Garrison Van Auken and financier Barret Van Auken" since neither is notable, why bother listing them? I understand parents, but grandparents feels like a bit much
"It was evidently progressive for the time" Is this needed? It feels the slightest bit to me like editorializing/or (mainly here the word 'evidently'-- what is obvious to one person is not, in my experience, necessarily obvious to another
I don't think so; sources are vague on this point. Her
NYT obit says "later took postgraduate work", but does not give dates. It is not clear that she graduated; seems more like it was a casual-type thing.
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"Francis was from an old
Philadelphia family and practiced law there for many years, which explains why Katherine was living there in the 1930s." Would you consider something like "In the 1930s Chapin was living in Philadelphia, where her husband practiced law for many years."? This places the emphasis on our article subject rather than her husband
"Francis briefly became a judge on the Third Circuit, " 1) I don't think it's immediately clear in this context what the third circuit is and 2) I don't think you can briefly 'become' something-- you can quickly become something or briefly serve as
"In addition to her service on the Bollingen Prize jury," do we have years for any of these?
Added dates for National Book Award and Shelley Memorial Award. Couldn't find specific dates for the LoC lectures—assume they were while she was a Fellow in American Letters, but didn't see anything in particular to confirm that.
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You don't seem to cite her exact date of death in the article
"who was known for her tight grip on those who won her favor" is this needed? I feel like it makes your gloss of who Mason was a little on the long side
"For a time, Chapin helped to manage Mason's affairs with her sister Marguerite." 1) do you know the time, and 2 is it "managed Mason's affairs with mason's sister", "managed Mason's affairs with Chapin's sister", or "worked with marguerite to manage Mason's affairs"?
I think we generally put poems and similar length items in "quotes" and larger works in italics
This is tricky. I used italics for And They Lynched Him, Plain-Chant, etc, because they're not just poems. I was thinking of them as analogous to operas (see usage of italics in, say, Aida), since they were set to music. Not averse to changing them to quotes, though.
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"Congress was debating an
anti-lynching bill sponsored by Representative
Joseph A. Gavagan." how does this bill relate to Chapin and her work?
Eddie891: I think I've added the relevant info from all of the above (in this section and in the rest of the review), including the bit about the connection between the anti-lynching bill and And They Lynched Him. Thanks very much for your comprehensive comments.
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