KELO-TV and its satellites perfectly matched the flow of goods through South Dakota, which centered on Sioux Falls -- clarity? From the second half of the sentence I'm reading this as something like "it was a popular station because Sioux Falls was a manufacturing hub", but I can't see how that follows.
More like it was a match to the needs of advertisers.
Might be worth contextualizing in "Young Broadcasting ownership" how common/uncommon digital TV access was at the time.
Good thought.
UTV is not broadcast in Rapid City, where Rapid-owned KKRA-LP was the MyNetworkTV affiliate -- tense of this sentence is confused
Reworded.
Has anything more come out about the MG/Nexstar ownership in the past 6-10 years?
Not...really.
The news programs grew more sophisticated and professionalized -- do we have a timeline for this?
Reworded to be less puffy.
It's worth (dup)linking KSFY and KDLT in the newscasts section, given it's disproportionately likely readers interested in that section will want to compare their coverage.
Done
Can we give a timeframe on the switch from SD to HD?
Done (HD transition of news tends to take up way too much of news sections in articles like this)
It might be more natural/less choppy to describe the history of the station's programs (introducing morning programs, afternoon programs, etc) in a dedicated paragraph rather than across separate sparse lines.
Done. Now with another ref which will help.
KELO-TV additionally rebroadcasts -- no need for 'additionally'
All good. I was wondering if actual statistics existed on how many people had digital-compatible devices at that point, but a Google Scholar search was only semi-helpful. Happy to pass this.
Vaticidalprophet18:21, 4 August 2023 (UTC)reply