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"and the eastern terminus" would probably be better suited as "and its eastern terminus" but if you think I'm wrong feel free to say so.
I agree Fixed
You stylize the first mention of a U.S. route as (US 54) but every instance later is US-54 or US-56. Is that on purpose?
Oops Fixed
"the highway travels through flat farmland and a two-lane road its entire length." Some sort of preposition like "it is a two-lane road" seems needed here.
Not sure how to change this?
Route description
By in large I think it is good. The main comment I have is where it says "the school" in Fowler. It looks like it passes multiple schools, a grade school and high school simultaneously. I was originally going to say it would be nice if it was more specific but at the least I think it needs to be plural.
Fixed
"K-98 then reaches its eastern terminus at US 54." No dash in the US-54. Also, an actual or approximate length between the two would be nice.
Fixed
"On K-98 in 2020" Not sure that "On K-98" is needed, as you've already established we're talking about K-98.
I think it needs to be added because of the sentence prior, a reader wouldn't know what highway.
History
Theres a weird ": 12" next to citation 16. Other than that, I don't see anything right away.
The 12 is the page number that has the content in the reference. The reference is multi-paged so it has that so the info can be found quickly.
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420Traveler I only see one thing, and it's picky so apologies about that. The second, third, and fourth sentences all start with "the" which gets a bit repetitive. If one could be changed (preferably the third sentence) to start a different way, I think it would flow better. Other than that, it looks good to me!
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