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Nominator: Krisgabwoosh ( talk · contribs) 05:09, 6 December 2023 (UTC) reply

Reviewer: Sammi Brie ( talk · contribs) 04:09, 2 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Let's do it right.

Hi Sammi! Thank you for opening another review. I just wanted to inform you that I'm in Bolivia for the month, so I may not be super quick responding. Cheers! Krisgabwoosh ( talk) 05:02, 2 July 2024 (UTC) reply
@ Sammi Brie: Sorry for the wait. I'll get this done now. Krisgabwoosh ( talk) 21:52, 11 July 2024 (UTC) reply
GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c ( OR):
    d ( copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Not much to do: just a question about the origins of a ref and textual claim for [9]. Ping when done. Sammi Brie (she/her •  tc) 06:55, 2 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

I cannot find any copy items to change. I spent several passes looking through this one. Very rare for me to say that.

Sourcing and spot checks

  • What makes Bolivia Decide (a blog) reliable?
  • The blog is actually a mirror site that takes news articles from other publications and republishes them. Therefore, I'm certain it's a republication of a reliable source. Unfortunately, due to link rot, the original source isn't easily searchable, and since the original publication is not cited, I can't even track it down on the Internet Archive. I debated keeping it in, since it has biographical information I couldn't find elsewhere. I decided to add it and leave its inclusion up to the discretion of the GA reviewer. Krisgabwoosh ( talk) 21:52, 11 July 2024 (UTC) reply
  • 9: Not very said in source, though support and threats of withdrawal of support are noted. Would like to hear a justification.
  • The article mentions that within the span of a week, Choquetarqui's organization went from marching across the country to support the president to threatening to withdraw all its support. In that sense, I think phrases like "fluctuated one a dime" are pretty supported by the text. Krisgabwoosh ( talk) 21:52, 11 July 2024 (UTC) reply
  • 14: News article on protests led by Choquetarqui against teachers' strike. checkY
  • 16: Listing in directory of committees shows Choquetarqui in the given positions. checkY
  • 17: El diputado alteño Jorge Choquetarqui fue elegido como jefe de la bancada paceña del Movimiento Al Socialismo (MAS), informó el senador Eugenio Rojas. “Ellos (Choquetarqui y la subjefa de bancada) van a entrar a debatir el lunes a las seis de la tarde, con otros jefes nuevos, que van a direccionar este año”, informó el legislador. checkY
  • 19: See 14

Images

As is usual, the headshot is CC-BY-2.0 and the signature is PD.