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I'll be reviewing this article for potential GA status. My review will be posted when it's morning where I am. Cheers,
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talk) 03:55, 25 August 2010 (UTC)reply
I've decided to pass this article as GA - congrats! Cheers,
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Writing and formatting
The sentence about his marriage might fit better at the end of the first paragraph under "Early life"
"from 1921–1923" -> "from 1921 until 1923"
Magor or Mahor?
Accuracy and verifiability
Note 1 cites Evans and Miller, but the reference cites Elliott and Miller - which is correct?
Combine identical refs, ex. 5 and 10
In the last three entries of "Works cited", why is the middle Toronto not linked while the other two are?
Broad
Do we know anything else about his children and his later life?