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The lead of the article does not satisfy
WP:LEAD. The second paragraph is just a replica of the first. Please, wright a new lead of apprppriate length. In addition, which would eventually merge into Baldwin-Wallace College. is not mentioned in the main text.
he joined the Methodist Church, whose influence led him through the academy What academy?
I'll fix point 1 in a couple days. As for point 2, I'm not sure which academy, since unfortunately I don't have the sources on me at this time, and won't for another couple months.
Wizardman15:03, 14 June 2009 (UTC)reply
Based on my research, it's possible but unlikely, since he didn't seem like the military type. I imagine academy = private school, so I'll reword.
Wizardman20:38, 23 June 2009 (UTC)reply