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I refer to a number of recent revisions by User:Jytdog. It is my opinion that the revisions have created a poor quality article and are disruptive editing WP:DISRUPT. A number of good references were removed, and relevent content to the article subject was removed. The edits do not comply with the Neutral Point of View requirement and are disruptive. There are also upsupported assertions and factual inaccuracies in the revised edits. I consider rewriting parts of the article and reinstating others. I do not wish to engage in edit warring and so if there are further questions about these edits, it is right that they are discussed and/or moderated through this page. There was also an assertion of ‘conflicted editing’ which are rejected. The edit in question refers to the article subject being referred to as an Entrepreneur which was supported by numerous references prior to them being deleted during the recent edits. Sazp1985 ( talk) 09:03, 4 March 2018 (UTC)
There are also upsupported assertions and factual inaccuracies in the revised edits.by linking to other reliable sources that show that the current article is incorrect. SmartSE ( talk) 10:34, 4 March 2018 (UTC)
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I propose to try and get this article up to 'Good' article classification. I note a number of different biographical articles classified as 'Good' have a similar structure to the proposed below. An example being the article of Buddy Fletcher which is short and encyclopaedic in nature.. I also note that the article before some recent edits was promotional and fragmented from numerous individual edits. Recent editors have cleaned this up. The most recent edits of 4th March 2018 by User:Jytdog start to add back content after it was amended for readability and I propose to further this work.
I would propose to change the opening paragraph to include additional, verifiable personal information where I can source it. I intend to expand the infobox to include information that has been cited throughout other parts of the article. I note a previous edit attempt I made was reverted by User:Jytdog and on reflection I believe that may have been due to a lack of cited information through the article (required under the criteria). This has been noted and further revisions will have this firmly in mind.
I would propose the next section should be on Early life. This will detail some of the background information contained within the event planning section. I would suggest that this is moved to this section plus additional detail found in some of the currently cited sources is added in. Having reviewed the currently cited sources, I do not thing this section need be much more lengthy than it currently is so not to give undue weight to this section. There is, however, additional background information available and it makes logical sense to place this into a different category.
I would suggest the section entitled Event planning should be renamed to Career, and trimmed of information relating to the article subjects company and its achievements which I do not think are directly related to the article subject. There are articles which specifically list events that this individual has worked on and I propose that the article is slightly changed to reflect career achievement related to the article subject rather than the article subjects businesses. This could otherwise be seen as promotional otherwise and not relevant.
I would suggest the Magistrate's service section be changed to Judicial Appointments. It could be argued that this should be a subsection of career along with the information on the subject articles business however as it seems individuals are not appointed as a career move, it would probably not be accurate. However, it is more accurate to list being a magistrate as an appointment rather than a service.
There are also additional categories which could probably be added in relation to the subject article.
After amendments are made, I would suggest that the article be submitted for article assessment to review its current classification with the added content.
I note there are a number of interested editors on this article, and so I would request any comments before I look to make these changes. I would also note that there is a COI discussion on my talk page. Having discussed a potential COI, I have concluded with another editor that no COI exists. I would declare that although I 'know of' this individual, which makes the editing more interesting, I have no personal relationship. I also would mention a point on neutrality - I do have some knowledge of additional information relating to the subject through the industry which he operates in, I shall be cautious to ensure all edits have a NPOV and are properly cited. Sazp1985 ( talk) 11:55, 5 March 2018 (UTC)