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Both images are relevant, of acceptable quality and copyright-free; taken from Flickr (both CC BY-SA) and uploaded to Commons under the correct attribution. Really cool to see that WP has these, as well!
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In § High school career, recommend opening with his full name since it is his first mention in the body.
"(Gregg Glenn, Dug McDaniel and Tarris Reed Jr.)" – is listing these people really notable?
I've done a lot of college basketball players. I often mention their signing class. This case seems strange because none of the others is yet a notable professional player. Although Howard may be the only NBAer among his signing class, the others may become notable players (or coaches) with WP bios and thus bluelinked. Then this won't seem so strange.-
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04:59, 8 August 2023 (UTC)reply
For the last sentence in the section, how about making it "that Michigan has had an All-Freshman honoree after Moussa Diabaté, Hunter Dickinson, Franz Wagner and Ignas Brazdeikis"? It looks a bit more formal and flows better.
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