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It is reasonably well written .
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In the lead, note what league the Seattle Reign FC play in, and spell out what "FA WSL" is, or at least what the WSL refers to.
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Hmlarson (
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17:27, 26 April 2017 (UTC)
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In Early life, you have "at age 16" and "at age sixteen;" stick with one, I think MOS suggests spelling out under 20 but consistency is the key.
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Hmlarson (
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17:27, 26 April 2017 (UTC)
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Cardiff City LFC has no citations.
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Hmlarson (
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21:25, 26 April 2017 (UTC)
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First paragraph of the Bristol Academy section has no citation.
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Hmlarson (
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22:01, 26 April 2017 (UTC)
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After mentioning the National Women's Soccer League, give the abbreviation for it.
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Hmlarson (
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17:27, 26 April 2017 (UTC)
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"Fishlock received a controversial red card..." is there any reason for the controversy? If so you should add it, if not it may not be necessary to note that.
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Hmlarson (
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17:27, 26 April 2017 (UTC)
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The 8–6–8 record is given the note explaining they're wins and losses, whereas a previous mention of a team record did not. Again, try to maintain consistency with that and either have all records linked like that, just the first mention, or none.
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Hmlarson (
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17:27, 26 April 2017 (UTC)
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Any way to expand the coaching career section? This isn't an issue, just it would be good perhaps to include her record as a coach, or some detail like that, to make it a little more in depth.
Added a few more sentences.
Hmlarson (
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17:27, 26 April 2017 (UTC)
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References: 9, 15, 18, 36, and 54 are all dead.
I ran broken link check and resolved all. The two left in the report (9 and 34) are working if you click on them.
Hmlarson (
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21:25, 26 April 2017 (UTC)
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Once these are taken care of I'll give it another look, but should be good at that point.
Great it looks good now.
Kaiser matias (
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00:51, 29 April 2017 (UTC)
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Thanks for your help
Kaiser matias . Much appreciated.
Hmlarson (
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01:27, 29 April 2017 (UTC)
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