Hi. I will be reviewing the
Javine Hylton article. Please give me a couple of hours to read through the article and collect my thoughts. I usually print the article out and go over it with a pencil, and write my notes on paper before typing them up, so please be patient. I'll post my review and any comments when I'm done. Regards, Matthewedwards :
Chat 19:32, 20 October 2009 (UTC)reply
Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:
and remains her biggest hit to date. phrases such as "currently", "as of" and "to date" are likely to age and should be avoided. Can the sentence be recast?
The remainder of the prose doesn't really meet the
Good article criteria. There are one- or two-sentence paragraphs, structural errors, etc. It needs a really good copy edit to improve
Too much of the article is unreferenced, so much of it may be
WP:OR
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. Major aspects:
It would be interesting to read how she performed in Popstars, and what songs she sung. The same for Eurovision. The article merely glances at what she's done, without really going into any depth. See
Clay Aiken as a good example of what should be included.
Due to the fact that the article is tagged in numerous places with {{citation needed}}, the article does not meet the
GA criteria, and has been "quick failed". I did conduct a review anyway, so hopefully editors will be able to use this GAN as an opportunity to improve the article. Good luck, Matthewedwards :
Chat 22:05, 20 October 2009 (UTC)reply