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Have requested some small changes. As I have a financial COI with Jardine Matheson, I'm not editing the page itself but instead requesting an interested volunteer(s) review the changes, and if they agree, implement them. Thanks! JeanetteM2 ( talk) 16:31, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
Please change 1st two sentences to be more standard and specific: '''Jardine Strategic Holdings Limited''' ({{bsx|id=129|JSHBD.BH}}, {{lse|JDS}}, {{sgx|J37}}) is an investment holding company. It is a subsidiary of [[Jardine Matheson Holdings Limited]].
Request tweaking and updating subsidiary descriptors (and rmving "holding," "amounts," "convenience store," and "auto group"):
The company holds substantial interests in [[Dairy Farm]], a pan-Asian retail group, [[Hongkong Land]], a property group, [[Mandarin Oriental]], a [[hotel chain]], and [[Jardine Cycle & Carriage]], a Singapore-listed diversified group.
2nd a 3rd sentences easily combine from: It also owns part of the stock of the Jardine Matheson group itself. It in effect owns its own corporate parent, enabling the [[Keswick family]] to control the group without providing a majority of the capital."
to It also owns a significant shareholding in Jardine Matheson Holdings Limited, its own corporate parent, providing an element of control to the [[Keswick family]].
For the 3rd sentence, Jardine Strategic was a constituent of the [[Straits Times Index]],
perhaps remove as old and irrelevant for the intro?
Also, the final unsourced paragraph seems to be a broad, generic description of the type of company, not a specific description of Jardine Strategic Holdings. Just remove as unsourced and odd?
Change heading from ==Holding % in Jardine's==
to ==Jardine Strategic Holding % in Jardine's==
Also, please update percentages:
* HongKong Land - 50%
* Dairy Farm - 78%
* Mandarin Oriental - 79%
* Jardine Cycle & Carriage - 75%