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"them even more suited for mass production" unclear to me what 'them' refers to here
"The accuracy of the Type 89 guns was severely reduced against aircraft because no high-angle gunnery
director was fitted" could you simplify this sentence? I don't think it makes very much sense to somebody who's unfamiliar with ships. Maybe add an explanation why the absence of a director made the guns inaccurate against aircraft
That would require explaining the function of a director, which is a bit outside the remit of this article. A link to director will have to suffice.
"Hagi (
Bush Clover)" Why not mention this in the lede?
The lede's a summary of the article and I don't feel that a translation of the name is appropriate.
"Fiscal Year 1943 " why the caps?
'Cause that's how I always see them in my sources, especially in government ones.
"for a speed of 27.8
knots" so was this the top speed?
Not covered in my sources, but I believe that that was the best that could be achieved by the revised hull design coupled with the existing powerplant.