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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 ( talk · contribs) 05:27, 17 July 2020 (UTC)
Pretty brief one this. A few comments:
- suggest adding |infobox caption=Enoki to Infobox ship begin to put the ship name at the top of the infobox
- I hate that actually. Seems entirely redundant to the article title and the name in the ship career infobox
- escort destroyers is a dab page
- True, but it contains the essence of the meaning at the head of the page.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
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02:36, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
- Really doesn't meet any of the exceptions at WP:FURTHERDAB. As part of my tweak of the lead I have linked escort destroyer to Destroyer#Later combat. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 07:05, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
- True, but it contains the essence of the meaning at the head of the page.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
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02:36, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
- in the lead it is "Tachibana-class" and in the body "Tachibana sub-class" perhaps add a sentence to the lead and tweak the infobox
- Done, but I'm not altogether happy with the wording, so feel free to make changes.
- tweaked. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 07:05, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
- Done, but I'm not altogether happy with the wording, so feel free to make changes.
- use "escort destroyer" early in the Design and description section
- move the sentence beginning "The accuracy of the Type 89 guns..." to immediately after "gun shield"
- Does seem rather pointless.
- The point is that it keeps all of the info about the main battery together. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 07:05, 31 July 2020 (UTC)
- Does seem rather pointless.
- should it have the coord template at the top, as it isn't there anymore?
- Good catch.
Not much to nitpick about. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 05:41, 17 July 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for catching all these nits.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
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19:37, 30 July 2020 (UTC)
- This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an acceptably licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 ( click to talk to me) 07:05, 31 July 2020 (UTC)