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Reviewer: Hog Farm ( talk · contribs) 03:51, 17 June 2021 (UTC) reply

• Link to Takachiho in the design section
• Infobox gives crew of 325, body says 338
• Infobox says completed in December 1885, prose says February 1886
• Is what the ship did in 1891 known, or at least where it was primarily stationed?
• "Jiyuan may have tried to pass to closely to Naniwa" - Should it be "too closely" (I'm bad with homophones)
• Recommend splitting the Battle of the Yalu River section, as a good portion of it isn't about that battle.
• Link the Boxer Rebellion
• It looks like the page link for Duus needs tweaking, as it's showing up as pg. 1 in the results when it's really linking to pg. 82 on IA
  • Deleted the link to the specific page
• Some sort of error in ref 48
  • Nothing's showing up on my computer
• sources look reliable, and image licensing looks okay.

Placing on hold, good work. Hog Farm _Talk 02:33, 18 June 2021 (UTC) reply

See if my changes are satisfactory. Thanks for the review.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 20:07, 18 June 2021 (UTC) reply

I've fixed the ref error (apparently it was missing the pp=). Passing now. Hog Farm _Talk 05:01, 19 June 2021 (UTC) reply