"the ship fought in the Battles of Port Arthur, of the Yellow Sea and Tsushima" --> "the ship fought in the Battles of Port Arthur, the Yellow Sea and Tsushima"
this seems inconsistent: "had a beam of 75 feet 6 inches (23.0 m)" (in body) v. "Beam: 76 ft (23.164800 m)" (in infobox);
as above: "full-load draught of 27 feet 3 inches (8.3 m)" (in body) v. "Draught: 26 ft (7.9 m)";
as above: "normally displaced 14,850 long tons (15,090 t)" (in body) v "Displacement: 14,312 long tons (14,542 t) (normal)";
this seems inconsistent: "six 47-millimetre (1.9 in) 3-pounder guns" (in the body) v "8 × 1 – 3-pounder guns" (in the infobox);
this seems inconsistent: "six 37-millimetre (1.5 in) 2.5-pounder Hotchkiss guns" (in the body) v "4 × 1 – 2.5-pounder Hotchkiss guns" (in the infobox);
"The Russian battleship sank in less than two minutes after one of her magazines exploded, Makarov one of the 677 killed." --> Perhaps, "The Russian battleship sank in less than two minutes after one of her magazines exploded; Makarov was one of the 677 killed."
inconsistent: "Fukio, p. 54" (in Footnotes) v . "Fukui" (in References);
Its seems that I was a bit too liberal with the copy-paste routine for this article; all fixed now.
"File:HIJMS Shikishima-1920s.jpg": I think this needs a source;
It does, although I think that it's OK otherwise for use as it's pretty clearly published before 1956 and photographed before she was disarmed in 1923.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
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16:28, 15 September 2012 (UTC)reply
This one's more problematic and may need to be pulled until the uploader provides the missing information. I've pinged both uploaders in hopes of getting the missing information added. Thanks for the review.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
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16:28, 15 September 2012 (UTC)reply
No worries, please let me know how you get on. I will keep the review open for a bit longer. If you don't get any response in the next couple of days, I'm happy to close as successful, but with the understanding that you will sort out the remaining issue prior to ACR or FAC. Cheers,
AustralianRupert (
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00:43, 16 September 2012 (UTC)reply
The uploader has added the source for this, although he failed to provide a date of publication, which I've requested. However, I recognize the series that it was published in, which began in the 1970s, so it probably meets the Japanese PD requirements now.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
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01:37, 16 September 2012 (UTC)reply
a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
No issues in this regard that I can see.
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
Article is stable. There has been recent work, but it has been focused upon building towards taking the article to GAN.
It contains
images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
a (tagged and captioned): b (Is illustrated with appropriate images): c (non-free images have
fair use rationales): d public domain pictures appropriately demonstrate why they are public domain: