It might be worth thinking about splitting up the Construction and career section with at least one subsection. It's a bit of a wall of text, currently. Just a thought, however.
Thought about it, but there's no convenient dividing point towards the middle since that's all Russo-Japanese War.
Ref # 12 (Brook 1985, p. 269) - why is this the only book short ref to include a publication date?
Fixed
Ref # 18 (Tully) - What this is supposed to be a reference to? I can't find any other mention of "Tully" in the article.
Fixed
Howarth is in References but not Notes. Is there additional information that could be added from this source?
No, it was a legacy source that I couldn't get anything useful from (very badly titled book). Deleted.
Same as above for Preston.
Something useful added.
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
A background section similar to that in
Japanese battleship Asahi would be quite helpful to the general reader... Is there a reason one wasn't included here?
That's in the class article. Asahi was a unique ship so she got the full treatment.
A few minor issues with prose, referencing and the image, but nothing major. Overall, nice work, and just a few tweaks needed before I promote to GA.
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23:42, 9 October 2012 (UTC)reply